【雅思写作该引用名人名言么?据说不可以】雅思写作该如何写

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小编今天带来的是关于雅思写作的考官说法，告诉你该如何写好雅思作文，话不多说，一起来看看吧！

先来说说一些比较基本的：

一般没有had a decrease/ increase的说法，一般是saw a decrease/increase。Increased, decreased, declined 这些上升和下降的词都没有被动语态。当the number, the amount, the figure， the proportion做句子的主语的时候，不能用account for。The proportion of 后面不能加句子，譬如说 the proportion of people worked in the healthcare sector是错的，要写成the proportion of people who worked in the healthcare sector。The amount不能替换the number。Ratio和rate一般不能替代proportion和percentage。Picture 不能替换graph 或者 chart。不要用定语从句读数据，譬如说 the crime rate in the US was highest, which was 0.3%. 这里的which was 直接省略。结尾段一般不写in conclusion。结尾段不能写数据。这些都是考官着重强调的一些准则，大家要牢记哦！

在看下面这一段考官段子：

From a personal perspective, it can be argued that these courses provide more job opportunities, career progression, better salaries, and therefore an improved quality of life for students who take them. On the societal level, by forcing people to choose particular university subjects, governments can ensure that any knowledge and skill gaps in the economy are covered.

考官在这个段落中，论述了大学生学习理工类学科的好处!具备大学英语四级(CET-4)词汇量的同学，你们会发现这个段子你基本上都能看懂，这些词汇有一个共同特点 — 具体，比如provide more job opportunities 提供更多工作机会, career progression 职业发展, better salaries 丰厚的工资。此外，像skill gaps in the economy are covered，缩短经济时代中的技能差距，有多少同学能够想到用cover这个单词来表示“缩短”呢?所以，你会发现真正的高手写出来的作文你是可以看懂的，但是，很多词汇你却写不出来。

再比如：By building such easy-to-reach sporting facilities, people who lead sedentary life are more likely to walk out rather than sitting in front of the screen all day. Besides, the diverse sports facilities can cater for all ages. For example, the outdoor sporting field is mostly used by young people to play football or basketball; likewise, fitness facilities built in the community are beneficial for elderly people who enjoy warm-up exercise.

上面这个段子是考官用来论述修建体育设施是如何改善人们健康的。你会发现下划线所标记出的词汇与该大作文话题高度相关!比如，easy-to-reach sporting facilities 触手可及的运动设施， sedentary life 久坐不动的生活状态, cater for all ages 适合不同年龄的人，warm-up exercise 热身运动，如果这些词你无法脱口而出的话，那么我便有理由认为任何一个涉及到健康方面的观点你是写不好的。

接下来在来欣赏下这篇考官范文：

话题：The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.

范文：The two charts give information about single-occupant households in England in the year 2011. The bar chart compares figures for occupants' age and gender, and the pie chart shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes.

Overall, females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males, and this difference is particularly noticeable in the older age categories. We can also see that the most common number of bedrooms in a single-occupant home was two.

A significant majority of the people aged 65 or over who were living alone in England in 2011 were female. Women made up around 72% of single occupants aged 75 to 84, and 76% of those aged 85 or over. By contrast, among younger adults the figures for males were higher. For example, in the 35-49 age category, men accounted for nearly 65% of people living alone.

In the same year, 35.4% of one-person households in England had two bedrooms, while one-bedroom and three-bedroom homes accounted for 28% and 29.8% of the total. Under 7% of single-occupant homes had four or more bedrooms.

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